Merlin34

JUST TRY FINDING OUT WHERE I LIVE SUCKER! :twisted:

Xavier's Quest is a fantasy story that begins in our own world, where young Xavier wanders into the mythic land of Avilandra. As he struggles to find his way home, ...

Whoa... that was a really touching story. I don't think I've ever read anything that can really bring me to tears. Brava, brava, bravissima. (I'm assuming you're a girl... D: ...

Nitpicking first. :P Thunder clashed in response to the flashes of lightening. 1. The sentence just seems odd. Try “Thunder roared. Lightning crackled.” or something like that. Use hard sounds ...

Welcome. And as for rules, the only thing that really springs to mind is to review 2 works for every work you submit. Other than that, just don't flame or ...

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The image for a sticky on this forum is the same as the Star Trek symbol. Look. ^Sticky ^Star Trek

No probs. I'll get the rest done soon. Maybe tomorrow or Wednesday at the latest. EDIT: Got it done.

The Nick Of Time. In hindsight, IT'S HORRIBLE! D: Dozens and dozens of characters, no personality, repetitive plot... I like to imagine characters from my current story killing Nick and ...

I've actually heard that the only people they trust are young girls. Also, if you need any evil unicorns, check out the Karkadann. It's extremely ferocious and attacks anything that ...

Review Please.

I made a prologue for my story, Xavier's Quest, which you should be able to find. But this prologue wasn't part of it at the time. I'd appreciate critique and ...

So, another day in my life in this tiny glass bowl. I wonder what... ... What was I talking about? ... CURSE YOU MY 5-SECOND MEMORY SPAN! D:

A super good hero trapped in a Crystal prison. Merlin34

Score Breakdown Do I Know This Guy? 3 He's The Anti-Cool 0 I'm Destined For What? 5 Healthy as a Horse 1 Momma HATES Him! 0 Total: 9 Merenor ain't ...