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I've done your advanced critique for this chapter. You're actually supposed to attach your entire novel, but I don't really mind. Gimme the rest and I'll do the rest.

Do you use humor a lot in your stories? I must say I can't get enough of it. I make sure not to make it too out of place or ...

I used to use Times New Roman, but then I went through a "Candara" phase. Now I use Arial Black.

I've only posted the first 4 chapters for mine. The whole thing is downloadable, but guests can't pick that up.

Sometimes when I post, it says "error getting user's post stat" and I don't earn any points. :(

I seem to have trouble illustrating emotion in fight scenes. I know emotions that you'd be feeling; shock, pain, fear, etc. But I can't really think of a good ways ...

Wow, this is a great guide. None of my stories have ever had a love triangle though.

Hmm... I never thought about that! Thanks! Lily and Xavier are 21st century kids, so they would know things that these backwoods fools couldn't dream of.

TThanks for the critique. I have added in a lot more emotion, but I always just seem to have trouble with things like that. I think that I should also ...

Just try to get as much done as you can before then. Thanks for this. I'll donate later since this computer I'm using now is incredibly slow.

Yeah... I had just added LOADS of stuff into it, wildlife basically. And getting rid of the "sacred lake" idea. There are lots of ideas that went in my first ...

None of my characters score over ten...

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Lost Years of Merlin is such a cool book series. Did you know about it? ;) Heck yeah! That's where I got my screen name! I use Merlin, Merlin3, or ...

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