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Thanks. I guess the "find 6 pieces of an artifact to destroy the Dark Lord" plotline should die though.

Sounds like a fantasy adventure about deposing some kind of tyrant king. MYRMIDON

Merenor: The All-Powerful Lord of All Things Great. Xavier: I like my name as it is. Lily: Maybe Amanda. Lord Latrapi: I'm not sure. Wolf: WHO CARES? If you could ...

The engine died, leaving only the sound of rain. Michael minimised the screen on his laptop and stood up. He walked through the lounge room, and onto the veranda to ...

Yeah, that scene I'm completely redoing. And I've changed Chapter 12 a lot. Not only do Lily and Xavier save Merenor twice , but they also take advantage of the ...

Ever since I can remember, I've had an aversion to writing stories based around collecting a set number of objects and using them for X purpose, because, to me, something ...

Thanks. A few questions/comments. 1. It seems hard for me to decide how Xavier's problems get solved. If I have him do it all alone, then you say "How'd he ...

Well, there are only a couple parts that I'm worried about, so I'll just post them. Early in the story, Xavier sees Lily (a girl he saw in a dream ...

Before I post a synopsis here, I'm going to ask, is there some sort of online "quiz", like the Mary Sue tests, that I could take? I know there are ...

Xavier: Video games rock, so technology. Lily: I'd have to go with technology. Lord Latrapi: I'm not sure. Magic can do many things, yet technology just looks so interesting. Wolf: ...

Another question, about how the sentence is delivered. Doe this sound natural? "In accordance with school policies," said Mr. Madrikson, "Xavier will be suspended for five days (or whatever number)."

I need help with this, because I have almost never gotten in trouble at school. Okay, so Xavier (13 years old, at an elementary school) is repeatedly taunted and prodded ...

Stephenie Meyer is your answer. Gender does not matter.

Typing. I can't write more than a few words before my hand gets sore.

Who's next? Dun dun dun.