Merlin34

No question? Come on man. Quid pro quo. If someone offered you one of five wrapped gifts; a tiny box, a small box, a large box, a round box, or ...

O_O No idea what's going on here? Did you get a book published? If so, mega-congrats.

If you have names or words that you made up (like Latrapi, Merenor, or Avilandra) in your story, be sure to add them to the dictionary of Word, or whatever ...

I liked it. You did a good job with emotions, though I don't know much about these characters as I haven't read any more if this story. One little nitpick: ...

You probably should make redoing King Dracerler one of the highest items on your to do list, because a story comes just as much from the antagonist as it does ...

Yeah, I've fixed the killing part. This time, he just blindly lashes out and catches the man in the stomach, not trying to kill him. And fixing King Dracerler is ...

Xavier: :| Lily: :) Lord Latrapi: 8) Wolf: :evil: Merenor: :lol: If you were an animal, what would you want to be?

I can't believe nobody is getting the Cthulhu references. (This was awesome, by the way.) I know what Cthulhu is, it just didn't seem to make much sense.

To be honest, I really didn't get what was going on. It seems like you move too fast. Describe a bit more. You barely describe this sprite at all. I ...

So, yesterday, I was looking at the Lightning Thief on wikipedia (haven't really read it though), and I thought I wanted to do something on the same key. Don't worry, ...

Here's another question. What are ways to describe confusion?

You have very good advice there. Not much I can add though. Sort of off-topic, but that guy, Kaleb Nation... something about him just irks me. Don't know what or ...

Quick question, what is the proper way to encompass characters' thoughts? I've always though it was italics with no quotation marks, but am I wrong?

Crap... I've been setting rabbit traps all morning. *goes to check them* OH GOD! MUFFINS! NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Wolf.