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This is... HORRIBLE OMG! By "horrible", I mean "awesome and intense". I like Alfred a lot, he seems similar to Merenor from Xavier's Quest in a lot of ways. The ...

If you have someone who faints (literally passes out) at the sight of blood, 1) how long will they stay under for, 2) how easy is it to wake them ...

Okay, I changed the title. As for me, I think that inspiration is taking an idea and putting an original twist on it. Rip-offs would be having a short protagonist ...

Where do you draw the line between taking inspiration from a story and just plain ripping it off?

Brisingr By far the brickiest and most boring of the Inheritance Cycle so far.

I'm like Oromis from Inheritance on this subject. There is no god. But if there is, he's doing a really bad job and should be replaced.

That's very good. How did you find it? Someone posted it on Anti-Shurtugal.

Here's a little activity I'm going to start to help improve your writing. I will tell you something to write, and you will write it and send it to be ...

I liked this, but you had a few prose issues and parts where it really dragged. Nitpicks: flared with brutality That part just doesn't sound right. Try just "flamed" or ...

Bickazer helped me with emotions a lot.

I usually just slip in details as I go.

I just thought it's really relevant to us writers, especially those in the fantasy genre. Great for a laugh too.

Thank you, YWS. You've helped my writing so much, shown me things I never could have known, and of course, all the people here are amazing, even those I vehemently ...

I removed my prologue long ago.

Bunnies with monster trucks? You have got to let me read that! I wish I could. I don't have the file anymore. :( All I remember besides the bunnies with ...