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I'm thinking that the herbs are nearly impossible to plant in a new place: they have to be tended and protected from predation where they already exist, and the invading ...

The story begins with Danyil, a boy living on a farm in a remote village. The all-powerful Dark Lord sends troops into town and destroys his home, killing his family, ...

EDIT: Oops, I copy-pasted the wrong article. THIS is it. To make your characters believable, it is important to make sure all dialogue is natural for the character. Example: "I ...

I think that farmboy heroes could be cool. They just need to get out of the "Dark Lord destroys farmboy's family" plot. Or maybe it could be a different kind ...

Congrats Karsten! You deserve it 100%!

Xavier's Quest is up for Round 2. I'll also PM you some other stuff about it.

Chapter 1 Lily Blossom “Oh come on!” shouted Xavier. “I finished my paper! Can you please turn the Internet back on for five minutes?” His father, Trenton, set down his ...

Badges of course.

To me, this story is... a wolf. A lithe and majestic creature. Unfortunately, this wolf got into a fight and is now covered in mud and blood. What I'm saying ...

Oh no, not a lorry! :o This was good. The prose was solid, though I did spot a couple iffy bits (which I outline below), and total cliffhanger at the ...

Any questions? Yeah, how do I keep my head from exploding from the awesomeness?

The Mirror of Merlin and The Fires of Merlin. And there's also another amazing book. It's called Maradonia and the Seven Bridges. It is so wonderful! [/extremesarcasm]

The creature didn’t know what he was, who he was, or where he belonged. He stared out from under the fallen log at the expanse of forest before him, seeing ...

Review Ratio: I like the idea, but I still think you should have to have more reviews than posted works.

Finish 2nd Draft of Xavier's Quest Stop eating candy/other bad foods Finish at least one other novel