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This is flawed. It was interesting, but the grammar and spelling is, to be frank, bad. There are a couple other novice mistakes in there. For the grammar, I'd just ...

I liked this piece. It has potential. Maybe this is just me, but I love the word "Musglove". It sounds like some kind of plant to me. I haven't read ...

I know that bows (or at least wooden bows from the Middle Ages) can't be constantly strung. One of my protagonists, Lily, picks up a child-sized bow and thinks she ...

I'd recommend His Dark Materials by Phillip Pullman, The Lost Years of Merlin, and The Great Tree of Avalon (both by T.A. Barron).

If there's going to be a love triangle, make both people just as likely to get the boy/girl. Let's take Twilight as an example. Classic love triangle. Bella has to ...

Two inconsequential metal parts slamming into each other to snap close the lock of a dog leash. The lion was chained. I could feel it pacing at the back of ...

Here's a rule. The romance should actually develop. "True love" and "love at first sight" are big cliches and rather lazy. Romances in real life don't just start in a ...

It won't let me change my password. It gives me a "General Error". And I'm not too worried. What would someone do with my YWS password, post crappy Twilight fanfics?

Merenor: Any specific shadow on the ground. What would be your first thought if you walked in on someone who was naked?

I'll use Merenor. Q: What's your full name and what is it's meaning? Merenor for it's meaning, my parents never told me. Q: Where is your favorite place and what ...

Also, where are the paranormal romances with creatures besides vampires, werewolves, and angels? I want a VALKYRIE, dammit!

I don't like horses either. Too darn smelly. Carnivorous mounts are bad ideas though, since they will likely require A LOT of meat, unless they are cold-blooded. Still, cold-blooded creatures ...

One thing I've noticed is that in a lot of fantasy worlds, the ordinary, non-magical animals, are all ripped directly from Earth. Rarely do I see an author make their ...

What do you mean by "actively" using "then"?

The magic in this world is different. No one throws fireballs at anyone. Instead, magic only comes in the form of potions, (for example, a potion to increase stamina or ...