Merlin34

Does anyone else watch this show? It's a documentary on PBS (Sunday night at 7pm). It is just... brilliant. Great for research too. This night's episode (it's over now) was ...

I'm not sure. You shouldn't make a name that people wouldn't be able to pronounce, and I cannot pronounce that at all. Is it "Gayr-win"? "Gey-er-win"? Something else?

Thank you for this post, Nate. It was needed.

Have you ever had one? I once had a dream where I saw two people (whom I soon recognized as two of my characters) going to a Twilight convention. And ...

Well, it's hard to comment on something so short, but I liked it. It does make me want to read on. Just a couple errors in the grammar I noticed. ...

Yay, I got my second yellow star. ... I don't really review much, okay? I'm more of a tips-and-tricks discussing guy.

I liked this. Your descriptive skills are wonderful, they let me see what's going on without being overly flowery. You conveyed the mood quite well, and the end was a ...

I try and go for a style that tells you what's going on without being overly flowery.

Overall, I wasn't really hooked by this story. The premise is interesting and it looks fairly original, but it doesn't read very well. There are a few grammatical errors that ...

Xavier's Quest: Boy must find his way home after stumbling through a portal into another world. Kalu, Newborn Spirit: Newborn animal spirit must discover what he is and save the ...

For names, you should make up some, but try to make the name tell the gender. For example, male names could have harder sounds, like "k", "t", and "b", while ...

In every book there is a character that has green eyes, or red hair, or a killer body. What's wrong with green eyes (I assume by green, you mean bright ...

Today went fine, but my nose is running. Got to start making quinzees for science class.

RSVP. If I can.

That initiation thing is just sick and wrong. But effective. Overall, I liked it. It has an interesting premise, and the shoot-and-heal thing seems pretty original. There were a few ...