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Bear with me, as it's pretty underdeveloped at the moment. I'm thinking of a story set within a prestigious (and very large) magic academy, one with a focus on creating ...

No, it isn't.

A few years old, but yeah. I'm sitting in then-Chair of the US Transportation Committee James Oberstar's (MN 8TH DISTRICT YEAH) chair.

It seems to consistently give me James Joyce. I ran about 6 pieces of my writing in, got James Joyce 4 times. The other two were J.K. Rowling and George ...

Good villain names, let's see... Cuddles Sprinkles Mr. Wubbles

Two questions. 1. How is the machine gun used on a military helicopter? Is there some kind of lever with a trigger? Is it activated via a button? How is ...

You bet your gluteus maximus. Wolves and cougars make horses flee. Unless your dragons are the size of insects, your horses are gonna bolt like crazy.

In my story, a character is temporarily blinded with a harsh flash of light. Would her eyes show any sign of it, e.g., would her pupils be extremely constricted?

I think it's a good idea to make them.

I'd say that someone like that would be vulnerable to wolves, yes. They'd look like a wounded deer.

"you actually have to PAY to get a book published!" You actually don't.

Voted, and will do so often. I don't know much about South Dakota winters, but Minnesota winters are probably about the same.

All in all, I wasn't too impressed with this piece. It reads like it could be powerful and compelling, but as it stands now, it's just awkward. It moves too ...

Werewolves. They've only got one weakness, whereas vampires can be thwarted with a pile of seeds. But really, dragons own all.