MeowMixed

Thank you, guys ;D I'm really glad you enjoyed this. Ah, sorry about the title. I should have explained that it wasn't an actual title idea rather than what I ...

Bleeding rust, breathing exhaust, I'm the kind of machine you've been searching for, now addicted to, but I'm only found in your hollow dreams Made of steel, yet so fragile- ...

I thought this had great imagery, and a it was a nice story. Though, I felt that the rhyming was a bit forced, which made it seem almost comical but ...

Personally, I loved this. I could see everything you were describing, and I loved the adjetives you used. Though I agree with Freak on the toenails thing, I think the ...

Ah, color me curious...simple and intriguing, I liked this piece. Keep writing!

--Ah, hello :) first off, this started as an assignment for class in which we had to portray the typical antagonist from a sympathetic point of view. This was my ...

Hallo, all! It appears that I've forgotten how to use bbcode, but nevermind that. Erm, my name is Rachel and I'm old...ah, seventeen D; I basically created this account to ...

Hello Silversun, I think you have an interesting idea here, but it could use a little fine tuning, if you don't mind. First off, the general theme is a bit ...