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Mel

  • Short Story » General, General Re: Pre-Teen Diaries

    Agreeing with what was said before, I do think you rushed this just a little bit and there could have been a bit more description. The overall idea so far? ...

    Jul 16, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Story Deleted

    Oh yes. Disturbing indeed! But very well done. You have your detail and description polished, but I don't really connect with your dialogue. It just doesn't seem like the way ...

    Jul 16, 2007


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