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Re: Storm Clouds
I don't have a review for you, sorry, just praise! I really liked this, you really know how to string your readers along in a mystery (you could say: we ...
Nov 21, 2011 -
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barefootrunner got all the grammar :) I just have a few points. I liked this, it's cute, and it's real, there's no fluffy language that takes away from the story, ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: An Ugly Girl
^^ I agree with bro, you're writing style is awesome, I don't know how or why, but it fits your story very well. It was confusing too, but I think ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: Purple Tulips
Ooh, I really like this, you made a powerful point with just (and exactly, that's impressive) 100 words. I love the 100 days, 100 words, it's subtle, but brilliant. It ...
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: Your Green Hoodie
Awww! Usually I can't stand fluffy things like this, but I liked this because it was well-written and the whole second person thing was a risk, and you pulled it ...
Nov 17, 2011
