Megan1234

Thank you both for the reviews! Nit-picking helps me quite a bit! I ended up rewriting quite a bit of it, not liking the direction it was going, and delved ...

Thank you for the reviews, this is a rough draft, very rough. I just wanted to get the gist of it up first. I'll definitelt be editing both parts of ...

Thanks so much for the review! I did notice a few errors re-reading, thanks for pointing them out! And Cain I guess just popped up into because of the whole ...

Hey guys, I'm just letting you know, I've switched this story over to a novel and its in the Action/Adventure novels. Pt 2 is up, please review! Thanks!

Wow, wow, wow. I really like this. "Cold, perky", that's really the only thing I can find. They seem to be antonyms of each other, not quite fitting well. Other ...

Thanks for the reviews, guys. Helps a lot. I edited a few parts of it, deleting some things and added more to certain paragraphs.

Wow, I really like it! Gives me a zombie/post apocalyptic feel with the father's comments and the gas mask stuff! Keep going, really good for 45 minutes! Perhaps tell us ...