Megan1234

I loved the story, though I'd love to know where it takes place. Like the country he is in, and the country he is leaving to. Now for my grammar ...

Wow, to be honest, I almost cried. Because this is a little personal for me too. My dad drinks, but he's not that into. He just gets angry.... Anyway. Really ...

Well, I've go to say this intrigued me. I read this chapter, seeing how long the others were. Cramped on time. My main pet peeve. Grammar. Gotta nit-pick, sorry. in ...

Wow, this story was gripping! Are you going to write more or is this the end? Just a few minor notes... Erik Levers, 14 years old, approximately 5'7, avoided my ...

Wow, well I read all four parts beofre reviewing, it's just how I am. Helps me grasp the story better, as a reader and a reviewer. Uh, saw a few ...

First off, I thought it was a very intriguing poem! Also, I like how you leave a lot to the reader's imagination, that makes me like it more. Readers picture ...

Well, you had reviewed a story of mine, so I thought I'd return the favor. I've been skimming over some of your work, the ones that strike a fancy with ...

This was quite good, though I have to agree with SoggyPoptart there. Marriage isn't all rainbows and butterflies. There would be conflict, and most couples don't see eye to eye ...

:) This is utter love, honey. Oh wow, I sound old. HONEY? dangg. Bad. Anyway, sorry. Onto your story. Utterly AMAZING. So much depth was put into your characters, I ...

Wow, I really like this! I forgot to read the chapter title and Subject title, OOPS! hehe. Even though I didn't read it, I knew someone would show up! Very ...

Once more, wow. I absolutely love stories that leave me speechless. Just one thing. I sit up. Show me. I'm not sure if it's just me, but should Show me ...

Wow, this was really great! My stomach hurt while reading the ending! You definitely have control of the emotion in this story! Quite well written, now I shall go find ...

Wow, wow, wow, wow, wow. :D I absolutely love stories like this. Angels/fallen angels are a weakness of mine. I absolutely love reading about them but have never been able ...

Well... Wow. Most definitely wow. I was surprised by this. I hadn't expected the poem?? to take a look at something like that, but I did enjoy it. I could ...

Well, I have to say I enjoy, even though there wasnt too much description of the MC. Some stories don't need it though, like yours. I felt the emotion and ...