Megan1234

:) This is utter love, honey. Oh wow, I sound old. HONEY? dangg. Bad. Anyway, sorry. Onto your story. Utterly AMAZING. So much depth was put into your characters, I ...

Thank you for the reviews, this is a rough draft, very rough. I just wanted to get the gist of it up first. I'll definitelt be editing both parts of ...

Thanks so much for the review! I did notice a few errors re-reading, thanks for pointing them out! And Cain I guess just popped up into because of the whole ...

Prologue “Vincent, I need to speak to you.” I heard my father's deep voice call from inside our home. I hovered for a moment, taking a deep breath of fresh ...

Wow, I really like this! I forgot to read the chapter title and Subject title, OOPS! hehe. Even though I didn't read it, I knew someone would show up! Very ...

Once more, wow. I absolutely love stories that leave me speechless. Just one thing. I sit up. Show me. I'm not sure if it's just me, but should Show me ...

Wow, this was really great! My stomach hurt while reading the ending! You definitely have control of the emotion in this story! Quite well written, now I shall go find ...

Hey guys, I'm just letting you know, I've switched this story over to a novel and its in the Action/Adventure novels. Pt 2 is up, please review! Thanks!

I had to get away. I had to go now! But where? Where could I go? Calm down, Nate. Calm down, think. Somewhere nearby. Not too close. Kenneth City? No, ...

Wow, wow, wow, wow, wow. :D I absolutely love stories like this. Angels/fallen angels are a weakness of mine. I absolutely love reading about them but have never been able ...

Well... Wow. Most definitely wow. I was surprised by this. I hadn't expected the poem?? to take a look at something like that, but I did enjoy it. I could ...

Chapter 1 It was a sunny day in St. Petersburg, Florida, a Thursday to be exact and most kids were in school that day. Except me. I was boy of ...

Well, I have to say I enjoy, even though there wasnt too much description of the MC. Some stories don't need it though, like yours. I felt the emotion and ...

Wow, I've gotta say this is really impressive. You hooked me right away, and my friend tagged along, reading over my shoulder. Seeing as we're the same age, really, really, ...

I decided to read both entries before reviewing, it helps give me a better picture of people's writing talent and such. With your first entry, I really loved all the ...