Megan1234

I loved the story, though I'd love to know where it takes place. Like the country he is in, and the country he is leaving to. Now for my grammar ...

Beck, your review is up! Hope you liked it. Interesting story line. Keep 'em coming people! :D

Wow, to be honest, I almost cried. Because this is a little personal for me too. My dad drinks, but he's not that into. He just gets angry.... Anyway. Really ...

Well, I've go to say this intrigued me. I read this chapter, seeing how long the others were. Cramped on time. My main pet peeve. Grammar. Gotta nit-pick, sorry. in ...

Bubbles, your review is done! Hope it helped you out!

Wow, this story was gripping! Are you going to write more or is this the end? Just a few minor notes... Erik Levers, 14 years old, approximately 5'7, avoided my ...

Wow, well I read all four parts beofre reviewing, it's just how I am. Helps me grasp the story better, as a reader and a reviewer. Uh, saw a few ...

Wow, this is amazing! If he was in an action-y pose, I could see him in anime/manga :P Also, just one little thing. Er, maybe two. The proportion seems a ...

First off, I thought it was a very intriguing poem! Also, I like how you leave a lot to the reader's imagination, that makes me like it more. Readers picture ...

Rules: Please, no badgering. It doesn't help if you whine about how slow I am taking. I promise to try and be quick. Most reviews will come in late afternoon, ...

Well, you had reviewed a story of mine, so I thought I'd return the favor. I've been skimming over some of your work, the ones that strike a fancy with ...

This was quite good, though I have to agree with SoggyPoptart there. Marriage isn't all rainbows and butterflies. There would be conflict, and most couples don't see eye to eye ...

Thank you both for the reviews! Nit-picking helps me quite a bit! I ended up rewriting quite a bit of it, not liking the direction it was going, and delved ...

Greatly appreciated :D

Chapter 1 I'd no idea how long I had been on Earth. When I woke, I knew three things. I was freezing, naked and in excruciating pain I knew nothing ...