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Mariel sat slumped against the bar, on her usual stool at the far end of the room, and, Glory noted with distaste, she had taken her boots off and had ...

Thanks for your help, both of you. In response to Ani May Queen's suggestion/comment/whatever, this drinking thing has been going on for awhile (like ... six months? a little more?) ...

I was able to read the first few sentences, and they were really good, but the TEXT BLOCK OF DOOM is making it really hard to get any further. I ...

It's an early draft, right? So now you know, and in the future, it's something to remember. That's all.