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To be honest, this sounds exactly like Star Wars, and not in a good way. That sounds really awful, but it's true. Everything you posted can be traced directly back ...

I wrote a thesis in my sophomore year, defending the Harry Potter books from a Christian perspective. Can you send me this? I'm very curious to read it. Anyway, back ...

I disagree with #1. If you're lucky enough to always be able to just sit down and have the words just flow, lucky you. However, there will be times that ...

Hm. I think the story could be off to an interesting start, but you need to slow it down. Give the readers more time to get settled into the story. ...

Hey, there! I just reviewed your story, so I thought I'd come say hello. You sure if it's okay if we call you Jen? (I don't like using my real ...

Well, I liked it. It was a good read, and I think that your description is particularly good, especially the first paragraph. Gramatically, the biggest problem is your apostrophe use. ...

Okay. The first thing that I noticed was that your grammar was crazy. What's with all of the hyphens, anyway? The first paragraph was particularly bad, grammatically. Now, I'm not ...

I liked the beginning. It actually reminded me of an exchange I had with a character in my dreams once. The whole story, though, is very interesting. I would try ...

Most Latin curses you'll see are neologisms. People take elements from real words and combine them to make new ones. I can't think of any off the top of my ...

It reminds me of Tolkien, which could be good or bad. I think that, for an opening, there was too much description and not enough action. (I say this as ...

LIFE. Literature. Imagination. Folklore. Experience. Even if it's not a magical cure for writers block, it's a good place to start when you've come to a road block, especially in ...

I think we Vermonters are pretty famously liberal. (Civil unions, anyone?) There's always someone saying that we ought to secede, and it ebbs and flows. From my own experiences in ...

I'm not really sure what you mean by "sketch," (like a drabble or flashfic?) but I think that if the intent is a short character-driven plot, then dialog is what ...

“When is the mage arriving, Kitty?” He asked anyone in particular. ... eh? He addresses his sister, but (didn't?) ask anyone in particular? Also, the name Kitty is one of ...

I do this, too. I like beginnings, but I don't like middles. I almost never actually get to ends. Just write down what comes to you for the stories, as ...