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I don't have time to finish reading this right now, but I will later. The thing I want to mention, though, is that she goes from being the goddess of ...

That was creepy and surreal. I like it. :D I think you could do with more description. Some of your paragraphs felt like laundry lists. While you're off to a ...

On Marriage What age is a reasonable age for marriage? This depends on the culture the people involved were raised in. Kids in ancient Rome were more or less ready ...

If librarians think that people reflect the contents of the books they read most frequently, than they must think I'm an elfish lesbian. (Haha, "fairy.") Don't worry about it; I've ...

Okay, this was a little disappointing. I think it would've helped a lot if we knew a little bit more about the characters. I understand that this is supposed to ...

I try to be polite, no matter whose work I'm reviewing. I try not to use the kid gloves, because when I was little, I hated when people would use ...

I always figure that if I don't get attached to my characters, my readers won't get attached to them, either. (Which can be the death of a story. It may ...

If it isn't really Japan, I wouldn't use Japanese in the title. The kimono you can probably get away with, but ... yeah. Sometimes our eyes changed color but kept ...

My first thought is this: since this apparently takes place in Japan, why don't the characters have Japanese names? Beware of fangirl Japanese. It is a very dangerous thing. Why ...

On electricity: apart from witches and wizards not needing it, modern Muggle appliances don't work in Hogwarts. It seems as though anything after clockwork, development wise, just won't function. ... ...

If it helps, I remember reading somewhere that homosexuality was listed in whatever big book of mental disorders and disabilities that doctors have until around the 1970s. If you look ...

Having just read part one, I was pleased to see part two had already been posted. Okay. I really liked the bit about how he was practicing what he was ...

I think the whole in media res thing can be used well, to throw us right into the action and explain things as we go. There's an art to it, ...

Freak the Mighty is my favorite book, hands down. No ifs, ands, or buts. Now, my second favorite book is up for debate. (It's a tie between Tithe and What ...

That's true. I think #1 just might not be worded correctly. Your heart does need to be in it, because otherwise you wouldn't push yourself.