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Scorpius. I mentioned this in your last draft, I think: Draco Malfoy's son is named Scorpius. With a "us," not an "o." Now that I've gotten that out of the ...

My characters usually either start off dead (Mitchell) or I've been planning to kill them for years (Savior), so I can't say I've ever had a problem deciding who to ...

Okay every time I get into a story for some reason I stop! Its like some unknown force that prevents me from getting beyond one hundred pages! I either get ...

Y'know, I don't read much poetry (something that irks my dear friend to no end - I owe her a public apology: sorry, Baz!), even though I write a little ...

This is so sweet. It reminds me of Snow Patrol's song, Chasing Cars . The sentiment is just so sweet and romantic, it's so nice to read. That being said, ...

I usually use this site. I've used the given name version for years, but admittedly only recently discovered the surname section. It's most excellent, and I highly recommend it. Sometimes ...

I've got awful writing habits. I'll open Microsoft Works and then I'll go back to Firefox, and I won't get anything written. *laazy* When I do actually write, I tend ...

Welcome to YWS. To be perfectly honest, if my little sister showed up here, I'd run screaming in the other direction and you'd probably never see me again. :wink: It ...

Kitty, that's my favorite part of writing. (S'funny; people never see the meanings I intend for them to see, they come up with other stuff instead.) ... and, er, sorry, ...

I like it. It was creepy and bizarre and surreal. Although you didn't go into detail about the bear with one eye, it was really vivid imagery and I can ...

But still there’s no sense on the screen Wipe the slate clean I really like this line, and the last ("The writer is writing" through "a poem"). :D The line ...

The "Rounded With A Sleep" part, sorry. I recognized the line ( The Tempest is my favorite of Shakespeare's plays), and I was wondering why you chose it. (For the ...

Isn't Dracula one of the original vampires, or at least, the "classic" vampire? How'd you mean it's "ruined" vampires? Anyway, I understand that "dawn" here is symbolic, but I think ...

Wow, I have no idea what's going on here. This poem reminds me of the song "Psycho Street," only without the skin-crawling creepiness. It's trippy and disjointed, which I'm assuming ...

Thank you all. I really appreciate the feedback. (It's especially nice to hear that my poetry is all right, because I don't write it very often.) Imp, d'you mind specifying ...