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I was referred here by someone from gaiaonline. That might've been me. I've given a few people there this link. (Usually when they're complaining about the relatively low standards of ...

And then where do the dead go after they die? They could just be dead, like Sureal said, or they could be reincarnated. I'm sure there are other options that ...

MisterWaffles, if sins aren't the reason people (theoretically) go to hell, why do they? (For the sake of the argument, let's assume that hell exists and people are sent to ...

I was like "wait, forum feud I don't even know about?!" until I finished reading the thread. (I'm usually on top of these things. I need to get my gossip ...

I like this a lot. I love the line about "cigarette finger tips." I was a little worried when you started with "coal black eyes," though. I was like ugh, ...

Just killing anyone aint only a sin .if you say something which hurt other person ,its a sin you said something untruth, its a sin and so many other Of ...

seriously, i have no idea what i was thinking when i wrote this, i was half asleep and had a dictonary... This is always a bad way to get readers ...

You might want to check out this thread on rhetorical questions in poetry , particularly this quote: Rhetorical questions in poetry must be mature, emotionally gripping, and thought provoking. You ...

P lay on , daughter of the moonlight . ¶ P lay through the night . ¶ P lay [s]on[/s] your gleaming white piano ; ¶ Unblemished , unstained , ...

(NB: A good reason does not include any variant of "I like the way it looks," "other poets have done it," or "it just feels right.") I'd have to disagree. ...

This really didn't do much for me. The message wasn't a new one. It's true that our society is mostly a visual one, but the idea of "inner beauty" is ...

Give us interesting little bits of information, but nothing else. Maybe tell us what brand of cigarettes he smokes, but not what color hair he has. Maybe mention that he's ...

I'm not sure it's entirely relevant, but most songs are in first person. Admittedly, most songwriters aren't stellar poets, but some are and there's some good stuff out there. (Also, ...

This isn't, like, amazing poetry or anything, but it's cute and it made me laugh, so you get a virtual gold star. :D I really have nothing constructive to add. ...

Woah. WTF. Okay, I tried. I really, honestly, tried really hard to read this. I even downloaded the .doc, thinking it'd make more sense. It doesn't. I think there's a ...