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Not all men shower everyday. You ought to. :wink: I didn't like a lot of this; too many weird rhymes. However, I liked the bit about Jesus, Eve and Hilary. ...

Take out the Japanese. If you don't speak a language, don't use it. (Fangirl* Japanese makes me twitch a little. I think every animé fan uses it at least once, ...

She stares at him [s]across[/s] over the endless sea of [s]endless[/s] desks. [s]At him.[/s] [s]Does he know her? Probably not. Does she know him? Of course.[/s] She folds a piece ...

@ sanguine_dreams : :shock: ! I've heard of cases of anti-abortion activists committing acts of "terrorism" before - blowing up clinics and killing doctors and what have you* - but ...

Under My Skin [s]I can't wait for tommorow And neither can you[/s] You are [s]never[/s] under my skin . You [s]and only[/s] you can stay t here , You know[s]?[/s] ...

I like the first line and the last, but none in between, except maybe "the venom enters my veins/ ... /rushing towards my brain." I think this is an issue ...

Not bad, but maybe a little too literal. The line "between me and the popular kids" invokes Snacky's law and also makes the poem a little restrictive. Maybe its just ...

Did you hear what hear did I? ... try saying that out loud. It makes no sense. I had to say it, like, ten times to figure out what it ...

A786, I don't think scientists sit down and say "today, we're going to try to prove a holy book wrong." Also, see the article I quoted below: Elsewhere, he notes ...

Role play, role play, role play. :D I like to think of myself as being reasonably skilled in regards to characterization, and I swear it's because I've spent so much ...

I lie on the couch watching the curtains move slowly; (1) my eyes are the only sense that I can trust now. (2) I cannot feel him [s]there[/s] anymore, I ...

Like everyone else, I'm not sure I'd think of vampires right off if it weren't for the title and author's note, but I think that's okay. A little ambiguity never ...

Snoink - You know, I never would have thought to edit that way, but it's a really handy tip. Thank you. Pervert the sewer’s angels Flying with clipped wings I ...

I really don't feel in control at all. It's a bit like walking a hyperactive Retriever down the block, with characters- them tugging at you every which way, after each ...

2b: marked by characteristics of the present period So, to answer your question, I think a fantasy novel set in the present could be considered contemporary. (If I had to ...