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I think this is really sweet, but at the same time, it could use a lot of work. I'm going to start with the title. I say this to everyone, ...

It took me forever to learn to read, if I remember correctly. Once I caught on, though, I picked it up really fast. (I remember being in first grade and ...

I'd be happy to read it for you. I don't think you have to worry too much about first publication rights. There are several threads about it floating around, but ...

I think it's a little awkward for you to mention that this was the happiest he'd ever been so shortly after discussing funeral preparations, you know? Plus, you have to ...

I liked this a lot, but ... "You have to," said Fred. "It's bad enough they lost me--if you give up, they may as well move to Azkaban for all ...

hello , darling . ¶ you look a bit gaunt . a little [s]bit[/s] anorexic . kind of hungry . ¶ eat me , won't you? [s]just a nibble[/s] I'm ...

Welcome to YWS! What should we call you? Don't say "criticized." Say "critiqued." Criticism sounds so ... negative, and although reviewers here can be harsh, they aren't usually mean about ...

My first suggestion would be to put a gradient fade on the bottom and left-hand side of the picture of Dakota Fanning, and the top of the picture of the ...

I say my poetry before I ever write it down, so I put in line breaks where I pause and/or breathe. Double line breaks usually indicate a longer pause (and ...

I didn't like the opening line. It was very emo. The first line is the most important one, so you have to make sure it really grabs the reader. I ...

Thanks for the correction, Fishy. (I really oughta read those.) I misunderstood.

I've got a couple questions about critiquing etiquette. Please feel free to add your own questions. First: how do you gracefully critique a piece that is clearly very emotional and ...

Sam, I think you have a really good point. (Dr. Cuddy comes to mind. Dr. House wears jeans, a t-shirt and a sports coat, but she wears rather low cut ...

Haha, I probably shouldn't say this, seeing as I am about to go listen to a talk by the author, but Monique and the Mango Rains didn't do it for ...

"Wanna see something cool?" Roscoe asked. "Define 'cool'," Llewelyn said. You might want to put something here about how Roscoe has questionable tastes, or that Llewelyn had seen one too ...