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I'm back, after a temporary hiatus. (College has eaten my life, but I'm on break now~)

I agree with Via: push the metaphor further. At first I thought he was chasing a girl, and that in itself is a metaphor for something else. Sit down and ...

My rule of thumb is this: the more epic it's going to be, the more you need a backstory. (Epic can also just mean long/involved; it doesn't actually have to ...

Now that I've got free time again I'm reading American Gods and The Silmarillion . I meant to bring Lirael and read that, too, but I forgot and left it ...

H'okay, so. My first issue with this poem is not even the poem. It's the line about rape. Rape is not sexy. There's a huge difference between a rape fantasy/role ...

Harry gazed over at the bed next to his. Draco’s [s]body[/s] torso or chest was rising and falling evenly. He must be asleep , Harry thought. Careful not to make ...

Phew, for about three seconds I thought you were my friend Ezekiel (whose real name is Eliza W). Imagine my surprise! Aaaaanyway~ it's nice to meet you. I'm also a ...

Whooeee, here we go. As it is now, I don't think that this is any good at all. However, I think the idea has some potential. I am a great ...

Honestly? It does nothing for me. I think I might be able to see what you were trying to do here, but it really just reads like a bunch of ...

You are like hot coffee on a cold day; you always burn my lips when we kiss. --- I found this on my computer today, and I thought it wasn't ...

Doesn't, er, sound like my cup of tea at all, but ... maybe it's worth a shot? I've gotta ask, though: what's so great about it? Are you gonna post ...

I think this belongs in writing activities, not here. Anyway, in defense of my_wonderwall, I'm wondering if this was a school assignment? I had to do something similar, only I ...

Forgive me for denying all my silent judgment cries This is the only line that really doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the poem. Somethig about it just ...

I agree and I disagree. On one hand, it is important to break away from conventions sometimes. Rules are made to be broken, dontcha know. I am not a fan ...

May I present The Über Writers Block Thread ?