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Re: both of you. kitchen. now!
You catch on quick, what with that Pat Buchanan option and all. Have an e-cookie. Normally, I'd recommend the buddy system, but I think Her Holiness, Saint Razorblade can help ...
Jan 4, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 1: The Ancient
First thought: infodump. *yawn* If that's not actually part of the story - which I hope it isn't - don't post it; we'll figure it out as we go along ...
Jan 3, 2008 -
Re: Blood Moon: Chapter One
My first thought is: what is a kid named Asriel doing in a modern fantasy, which I have to assume this is? Asriel is just not the kind of name ...
Jan 3, 2008 -
Re: Where am I?
Oooh, butterflies! I hope you post your work-in-progress, 'cause I'm looking forward to reading it; it sounds like a combination of all of the things (or, a lot of the ...
Jan 2, 2008 -
Re: What are you reading at the moment?
I just finished Weetzie Bat (again), but I'm still working on American Gods and The Silmarillion . (& I'm thinking I might have to read The Perks of Being a ...
Jan 2, 2008 -
Re: Smoke (your worries away)
Cornelius, relax. I'm a non-smoker. I'm also perfectly aware that I might drop dead as soon as I post this. That does not change the fact that cigarette smoke is ...
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: God Knew
My first thought: preachy. I'm a Godless Heathen™, but I'm not against religious poetry. What makes this one sound preachy, I think, is the repetition of "God knew ..." I ...
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: The Fallen Angel. Chapters 1 and 2.(7773 words)
There. I edited the first chapter; I'll try to get around to the second one sometime soon. Some things to keep in mind. You said "suddenly" and "noticed" and "realized" ...
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: The YWS Yearbook '07
Oh, dear. I'm pretty sure I haven't signed this yet. (Nothing like leaving stuff 'til the last minute, ne?) Uhm. I really don't have anything to add, except: go check ...
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: Writing Resolutions
I'm glad to see people like the thread. :) (The added bonus, of course, is that you can look at everyone else's goals and get ideas from them!) My writing ...
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: Ni-Hao.
I went with a student group, so we went a bunch of places. Beijing, Chongqing, Qufu, Xi'an and Hohhot, in that order, if I remember correctly. :)
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: Ni-Hao.
Ooh, that's so exciting! :D I speak very, very little ("hello," "please," "thank you" and I used to be able to say "can I have chopsticks, please?" because I always ...
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: New to this site
Legend of Zelda fan, are we? (I've actually never played, but I'm thinking about getting Ocarina of Time from eBay.)* Aaaanyway~ now that I'm done prancing around and looking like ...
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: Guten Tag
Hey, there! I like your icon. We both seem to have Wizard of Oz in mind right now, ne? (I'm guessing your icon is a reference to the infamous "Dark ...
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: Ni-Hao.
*pounce!* Oh, my goodness! Do you speak Chinese? Have you ever been to China? *blah, blah, blah!* ... *ahem* Welcome to YWS. :)
Dec 30, 2007
