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I try not to leave these kinds of reviews, but I wanted to let you know that I'm slowly working my way through editing/critiquing/reviewing this, and I'll post it as ...

Okay. This is a really tough topic, and it is hard to work with, so let me give it a shot. First, and don't take this the wrong way:if this ...

On one hand, it's silly for the government to pick the child's name (for religious reasons, no less!). It isn't really something they should be concerned about, and it's an ...

There are lots of gay people who don't "act" gay. That's a stereotype ... of course, there are some gay men who are particularly effeminate or whatever else, and some ...

I hate my life . I hate it so [s]bad[/s] bad I wanna cry . I never want to be anyone [1] I just rather be gone. "Please dear God, ...

alleycat13, why should Dumbledore have to "seem" gay? I mean, do you go around thinking "well, so-and-so seems straight"? (Also, I totally was 'shipping Grindledore before it was canon ... ...

Good luck with your fantasy novel! If it's long, you can post it to the Advanced Critiques forum (in the "Literary" section) and get some good reviews, but don't forget ...

Fishy, that would be so awesome. I'd love to read your notes, if you want to share them.

Aet, that's pretty awesome. (I mean, honestly, if they just followed the books , they wouldn't've had this problem!)* --- *but I don't think that was why she originally outed ...

Also, if you're doing a blockquote (often used for quotes more than forty words long in scholarly papers) you indent everything, not just the first line of the quote. */geek*

~Volant~, you needn't worry about people stealing your ideas or being offended by critiques here. I've said it before and I'll say it again, but YWS is one of the ...

I was wondering if anyone had any tips or information or links about how to write children's books. (I'm talking like picture books, minus the illustration part because I can't ...

You seem pretty attatched to it, so why not take a little break from it and then go back and rewrite it? I mean, work on some other stuff, or ...

Oh, I like the idea of feathered dragons, or, at least, dragons with feathers. (I read somewhere that the dragon myth might've started with people finding dinosaur bones, so if ...

You can have a majority of your characters (and the people in their 'verse) have magic without it being "dull and repetitive." After all, they could have varying levels of ...