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Re: The Magician
I liked the first section much better than the rest of it, because there was some sort of coherent rhyme scheme. I feel like the second stanza is the one ...
Jan 11, 2008 -
Re: Belief in God
So, I really enjoy writing about religion, especially interfaith dialogue and characters finding or losing or testing their faith. However, this is complicated by the fact that I am a ...
Jan 11, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [2]
5/10. I don't find it particulary amusing - pretty standard lines of dialogue - but I have a feeling it's from something (movie?) that I'm not familiar with. I'd probably ...
Jan 10, 2008 -
Re: Rate The Custom Title Above You
7/10. Points for using classic e-humor, but minus points for taking up multiple lines. (This is a purely grumpy-designer-aesthetic dislike of boldface and in no way your fault.)
Jan 10, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [2]
4/10. It's confusing and the typography isn't that great. (The quote isn't spectacular, either.) It's pink, though. I like pink.
Jan 10, 2008 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
I was . Death isn't so great, though. There's nobody to talk to except Ian and he doesn't seem to like me too much. -Mitchell What would you do if ...
Jan 10, 2008 -
Re: collaborative writing
There's a thread for this here . Feel free to post your own idea, but also to read it and see if there's anyone you'd be interested in working with.
Jan 9, 2008 -
Re: Writing for Children?
Thank you, Fishy. (Sorry I'm just replying!) Pacific, I actually don't see small children that often. I don't babysit and my "little sister" is sixteen. :oops: (I was working at ...
Jan 9, 2008 -
Re: Another one? Oh my~
Welcome to YWS. I love your username (*is a big fan of creepy dolls*) and your avatar. Please enjoy your stay and feel free to check out the Buddy System ...
Jan 9, 2008 -
Re: Andrienne and the Clockworker
Well, it's kind of boring. I really like clockwork/clock makers, especially if there is steampunk (or clockpunk) involved, so I guess I kind-of had my hopes up. This was a ...
Jan 9, 2008 -
Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever
Nate, I've gotta say, the Mary Sue opening is precious. *snerks* "He could tell he was pregnant when he woke up the morning after." (Yes, he. I was recently traumatized ...
Jan 9, 2008 -
Re: "My Book" (preface)
Ryan sounds pretty much exactly like Lestat, only apparently, not dead. I'm a Lestat fangirl, myself, and there's nothing wrong with having a love interest that hot, but the fact ...
Jan 8, 2008 -
Re: Important Message For Usergroup Leaders
Oh, that "auto join" possibility sounds excellent. I always feel bad when people are waiting to join and I just haven't been online (or checked my email) and let them ...
Jan 8, 2008 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
It wouldn't be a secret if I told you, would it? -Mariel, in a good mood I see dead people. No, seriously. -Ian Perry What's the most outrageous lie you've ...
Jan 7, 2008 -
Re: My Crazy Depression
First off: I got nothin' against short poetry. I'm all about short poetry. I think that it can be done well, but this just doesn't do it. Have you ever ...
Jan 7, 2008
