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Re: Heaven
I play in a role-playing game that mostly takes place in Heaven, and in our story, it's an entire universe. I picture it as always sunny but not too hot, ...
Mar 23, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
I'm guessing a bittersweet romantic story about a girl dying of some weird heart disease and her lover and her trying to do all of these things before she dies. ...
Mar 23, 2007 -
Re: the morning sad
I figured it could be read as a stand-alone sketch, where the reader could fill in the details with their own imagination. I have a hard time remembering that most ...
Mar 23, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
(Imp, I always end up running your titles through Google to try and figure out what they might mean. *fail* Yes, romantic comedy. You win.) [s]I'm thinking a story about ...
Mar 23, 2007 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish
Granted, he's sweet as sugar and your parents like him more than you. I wish I could come up with a title for this story.
Mar 23, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
A story about the colorblind, non-synesthetic son of synesthetic artist parents. He feels out of place in his colorful family until he finds that he can make interesting, black-and-white collage ...
Mar 23, 2007 -
Re: The Trinity Test
I liked this. I really liked this. I particularly liked how you didn't come out and say "the atomic bomb," but left that for the reader to figure out. (I ...
Mar 23, 2007 -
Re: the morning sad
This is a direct sequel to another 2am , although I don't think you will have had to read that first to understand what's going on. --- “Hey!” Mariel’s voice ...
Mar 22, 2007 -
Re: School Uniforms
I've never had to wear a uniform, but my mother went to Catholic school, except for two weeks in a public high school. She said she hated not having a ...
Mar 22, 2007 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish
Granted, but [s]I can't think of a way to corrupt that[/s] now people think you're "easy." I wish today was Friday.
Mar 22, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game
If I could get back to when I belonged, you bet I would. I want to know why I'm now. -Mariel If you had the power to change one major ...
Mar 22, 2007 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish
Granted, but now you never speak up when it's important. I wish I had more excuses to [s]harass[/s] flirt with him.
Mar 22, 2007 -
Re: New
Hobbies= learning Yeah, that sounds INCREDIBLY nerdy, but learning is a very broad topic; I'm trying to learn Welsh, and I'm intent on learning Spanish to the point of fluency. ...
Mar 22, 2007 -
Re: I'll be MaJa
Hey, there! (I think there might be a spell checker installed here, somewhere. There's a little link to it at the bottom of the page.) Your English is really not ...
Mar 22, 2007 -
Re: Hello.
Welcome to YWS! There is an "art" section in the "literary" forum, towards the bottom. I think it would be neat if you posted some of your work in the ...
Mar 22, 2007
