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Granted, but the final result is completely horrible and you take any criticism personally because you can't see why anyone could dislike your masterpiece. I wish I was caught up ...

A Bohemian artist-girl. Her real name is something boring, like Kristyn, but she shortened it to make it sound more exotic. She wears sarongs and hand-made jeans and such. Her ...

Ooh, I used to love playing in the snow! I'd build snowmen and make snow angels and have snowball fights and ... and ... and ... and it doesn't snow ...

Granted, he makes you cook by yourself. I wish I was more motivated.

First, I must say that this is 1,000x better than what I was writing when I was your age. :D Okay, now onto the actual critique/review: it's hard to tell ...

Hear what? If it's a ghost, tell them I'm busy. If it's a human ... tell them I'm busy, too. -Ian Hear what?! -Stella What's the most beautiful thing you've ...

[s]Uriel.[/s] If I ever see That Bastard again, I am going to skin him alive. I'd really rather not end up in jail for murder - the son of a ...

Granted, but you see yourself-from-the-future, think that you-from-the-future is some sort of demon, and kill you-from-the-future, a la the timeturner problem in Harry Potter. I wish this essay didn't

You'd honestly have to ask Glory. I don't remember any of it, except being on fire and freezing by turns. I vaguely remember something about my parents, but it may ...

The difference between pets like dogs and cats and wild animals like polar bears is that dogs and cats are domesticated, and they have been for a very, very long ...

I keep thinking of St. Peter, who guards the Pearly Gates. So, maybe a Catholic boy who helps at an orphanage, taking care of the "lost souls" there. He grows ...

(*wins!, almost*) A story about a story, like the old Native American myths about the first keepers of oral tradition. I'm thinking it takes place in the modern world with ...

The story of two actors falling in love while playing Romeo & Juliet. It's a cute, fluffy love story, only both of the actors are male. That I would read. ...

Granted, but there are so many of them you can't ever possibly read them all. Plus, good books are easy to find, but great books are nigh on unheard of. ...

You seem to have some weird thing going on where you put a space before and after a comma or period. You don't need to do this; indeed, you shouldn't. ...