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Haha. I REALLY ought to get bored more often. But I'm currently working on a story, So I don't think anything new would come out soon. Anyways, did I give ...

Haha, Thanks for the compliment! I guess I should get bored more often :D

Haha, noted. Thanks for your help! :) Much much appreciated :D

Haha. Oops. I'll work on that after I finish the next chapter maybe. Action action action... Still abit in the intro stage. Maybe I should slip in some little funny ...

PM me when the next chapter(s) come out please. Interesting twist in the plot. Nice :D

P.S: I would not just yet classify it as historical fiction... because as the story progresses I added some romance {which I might add, have zero experience in writing, am ...

miyaviloves - Thanks for the advice! FreakyDoo12 - Haha, I will. Erm...no? It can't really be based on anyone I know, the setting is in well.. I'm still not too ...

Haha. Thanks, really. THough you didn't critique, the intention is there. I agree, these are really competent and helpful people. Better than I expected, the reviews I got. I must ...

WOW. Thanks for pointing out all the blind spots for me :D I feel like I have to redo the whole thing again. Hmm. The "sister leaving in the middle ...

Wow. Thanks so much for your help! :D I plan to keep her character quite consistent, but I plan for the story to span over a few years. Just a ...

Erm. I'm sort of confused. Isaac is still alive? Then who was Carmen talking about in chapter 1 where she killed someone? Then now she's guilty about someone she killed? ...

Haha, I have to admit... It does kind of scream Twilight. But yeah, you can't help it, Its just so awesome. But at least your story seems to be leading ...