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Cool! I feel enlightened :) Very insightful, I learnt more about Buddhism, and its origins. :D

Oops. Sorry. Then I wish I could fly without tiring out.

I'm sorry I can't help you review much. I'm not qualified and I don't think I want to risk giving wrong advice. Sorry.. Anyway, I liked it. Marijuana = Weeds ...

Thats easy to corrupt, Lord Anzius. Granted, You get the cheeseburger and eat it. Then you choke to death :D HAHA :) I wish I would die and live in ...

I think you guys are aware that he/she meant: "Can you understand this? Yes? Easy, eh?" I've got a question. There's such a thing as fraternal twins. Are there paternal ...

Well. It is not a totally fair comparison. Harry Potter is also fiction, but on a different topic, targeted at a different audience. J.K Rowling's use of language is more ...

Haha. Oops. I'll work on that after I finish the next chapter maybe. Action action action... Still abit in the intro stage. Maybe I should slip in some little funny ...

BIG MISTAKE. You spelt the lead's name wrong. Its spelt RENESMEE. You missed out an 'E' at the end. Better change that before you upset some overprotective Twilight fan! Are ...

You spelt countenance as countinance. Very Jane Austen-ish indeed. The language and eveything seems to be influenced by her writing. I've recently been reading all her works. Quite similar style. ...

Wow. Great job. You managed to aptly convey the feelings of the girl. I totally pity her. It sounded like you had actually experienced it. I hope that is not ...

Hey readers. I'm back after quite some time. Sorry I didn't post it sooner. Unforseen circumstances caused me to delay. This is a revision of Chapter 1, and though the ...

ARGH. I agree with lucyy CLIFF-HANGER!!! I have to wait again. Darn it. Oh well. Good chapter, too short, I want moremoremore!!! :D Happy writing! I look forward to your ...

Religion does not cause the problems. Like some people have pointed out, People who need comfort can seek and find solace in their God. The problems you are probably referring ...

Haha. It seems kind of obvious what my reaction would be. I'm really against prejudice of any kind. Of course interracial dating is okay. Who cares what skin colour or ...

PM me when the next chapter(s) come out please. Interesting twist in the plot. Nice :D