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I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! It seems like the best so far, to me. Your story is coming along very well, I see. I love how you portrayed Dora, And her ...

Here's chapter 6! I hope you don't get disappointed. Thanks for your support and helpful comments! _______________________________________________________ Miranda’s birthday was just around the corn

Hey Reuben A, I know how to do a banana kick, but I'm not very good with descriptions. Its (aka Bending the Ball, Inswinger & Outswinger). A shot kicked into ...

I apologise for the terrible attempt at poetry and weak ending. Your comments are much much appreciated :D _______________________________________________________________________________ The next morn

Haha, thanks! But I think I'm doing the British spelling. So stuff that are 'z' in American, are 's' in British. Apologize/Apologise. I've got to stop mixing them up. I ...

Haha, thanks for the explanation. I always thought it was the name of some Character in a video game that you played or something. Awesome name :)

Hey emozemo, Firstly, Thanks Nutty for pointing out the errors! Your story is... baffling. I couldn't really make out anything about the character, And with all due respect, you need ...

Chapter 4! Here goes nothing... *Flees from readers* __________________________________________ We stood facing each other and for a second, I had a proper look his face. I realised that he was ...

Haha, thanks for your VERY generous compliment, Reuben A. Though, I'm sure someone will point out some mistake sooner or later :D

Haha, thank you very much for your compliments and reviews! I'll try to get bored more often :D

I apologise in advance for: 1) My poor romance descriptive skills 2) Inaccurate portrayal of a typical American High school 3) Confusing everyone with my football/soccer terms, especially when I ...

Haha, based on what KJ says, There's probably more confusion and overreaction that's going to happen. I'm only editing the story as a whole, So yeah, some of the mistakes ...

Oops ._. Sorry about the horrible depiction of American High school life. But I'll edit everything at one go. For now I'll just take note of my errors first. Thanks ...

Sorry for the numerous errors in my story! First try in Romance...ever. :oops: Thanks for all your help in reviewing my work! ____________________________________________________ “Argh!” Sean yell

Thanks for your comments people! Actually, if I haven't pointed out yet, The story is actually already done :) So I decided to post this story first and see what ...