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Just got an update: It's only an excerpt. Well, I wish you luck on your further chapters And sincerely hope that you'll get somewhere with this story. Try to tone ...

Swollen and disgraced you still kissed me, then retreated behind your job. You were easy on the eyes and my skin. It’s a shame you are so busy, it’s probably ...

Well, everyone's pointed out the tense confusion thing. Other than that, my critiquing skills aren't good enough to pick up anymore flaws. If there even are anymore :) I like ...

Hi again! :) Now I'm wondering if: 1) Helen has lost her marbles & the world is twisted and disturbing or 2) Helen just lost her marbles. But once again, ...

Hello :) I did find it disturbing to a certain extent. I've read a few of these kind of stories. I liked the thoughts Helen had, It did creep me ...

Since everyone seems to have pointed out the mistakes I could find, There's one thing I'd like to say: Blonde hair, blue eyes, B-cup; hell, she was everything a man ...

*Screams* *Points* AHH!!! YOU'RE FROM SINGAPORE!!!!! :D:D:D:D:D Welcome to YWS!!! *Screams some more*

Argh. My memory is so bad. But I've read so many that I can't keep track. One I can think of right now is 'Raven Queen' by Pauline Francis. Very ...

Bear with me for this chapter and try to stick around for the next, Because things are gonna get messy :) All your comments are appreciated! ---------- “Hey boss, can ...

I really find these kind of stories very touching, And yet, I seemed to have sealed my hormones in an empty baked beans can and chucked it somewhere obscure. Because ...

Yeah. I did this story because I was doing research on Animal Abuse for school. And I saw and read so many pititful incidents, I even cried, because it was ...

Sweet plot. There really are things like love at first sight. Archer has a rather cute reaction, Running in the opposite direction of her next class just to stalk a ...

A Little Too Not Over You by David Archuleta. I need some inspiration for my story :)

I totally get what you mean. I love playing the piano. Correct me if I'm wrong, but cacophony means a mixture of unplesant and loud sounds? Right, I forgot. There's ...

I googled 'writer's website' because I was looking to improve my stories and also read other people's works. I picked this website because it seemed to be the best (YEAH! ...