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One of the more orginal and rare plots I've come across, And very authentically written. I've done some research on Neanderthals too. Your story is very cool and descriptive. Though ...

Unfortunately, the Moony Men on the Moon ate them up, and digested them.

Unfortunately, after they 'killed' us, they '!@#$%-ed' us, which is Martian Language for the english word 'murder'.

Hey Raymond! Welcome to the YWS community/family. Jump in, the water is fine :) Night Mistress has pointed out the rules already, But specifically, the 2:1 ratio is a rule ...

Yeah, I edited it before you reminded me. Sorry about that.

You can simply avoid the fanfiction section, Because that's where the Tiwlight fanfictions all pop up, Edward Cullen included. But in the Fantasy & Romance section, You won't hear people ...

OverEasy you are so gorgeous!!!!! *envious* :D Looks like you took the second picture in your bathroom.

Haha, sorry about that. I just remembered that rule but you beat me to the punch line, Night Mistress :) Once again, welcome to the YWS family! :D

Hi Molly! Nice to meet you & welcome to YWS! I hope you'll have tons of fun here, because I did! Anyway, since I'm the first to greet you, there ...

Hello! I shall start off with some nitpicks: 1)The sentence mentioning Global Warming is awkwardly phrased, so you should revise that. Well, I'm done with the nitpicks. Good points: Grammar, ...

Apparently I am writing at a slow pace. Because everyone's telling me develop this and that, But I've still got many chapters to do that and which I plan to ...

So to get people curious, They sent us an anonymous message, saying: further and further down the rabbit hole we go Which really freaked me out for some reason. Anyway, ...

Yeah, I had intended the 'son' thing to be obvious enough, But I wanted the 'triplet' thing to be a bombshell :D Everyone's telling me to slow down in this ...

Hi, Your plot is rather interesting, though many Edward Cullen fans would kill you for killing him. But one thing my friend, Quid pro quo. There is an important rule ...

*shudders* please don't. That was a whole other category of 'R' rated scariness. *traumatised*