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Re: Piano Forte
Hey fellow Greeter! Anything with 'Piano' in it would certainly catch my attention, So I decided to check this out. What a spooky, enigmatic ending, Though, I must admit that ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: An encounter
Nice one, Helen! At the ending line, my jaw dropped and I actually whispered to myself: "What the-?!" Oh gosh, what a selfish creature Maria is. If you intended for ...
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Re: Blood Vessel
Hey Face Engine(nice username!), I'll just bring up a few points: 1) The characters are rather flat, two-dimensional. Develop them more, explore more varieties of emotions and reactions, that will ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: The Baroness, The Villainess
Sumi!!! Hohoho, I have been ensnared by your story. It's so intriguing, and you've left out enough 'to-die-for' details, That would make your readers come back for more :D The ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: Disneyland Romance
staplestoo, jok101, Please don't step out of line. Somethings were uncalled for. staplestoo: Harsh criticism is fine in reviewing the work, but not when you're insultig the author's life, considering ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: Disneyland Romance
*sigh* I see you haven't been receiving very welcoming comments. Anyway, what I shall focus here, is your writing style, Not really on what happened and how ridiculous it may ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: Mary, The Obedience Fairy - [Part One]
Hey anti-pop! This story is really interesting XD An obedience fairy? It struck me more as a little children's book rather than Fantasy fic at first though :D Anyway, for ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: Death of A liberator - corected spelling
Hi pizcofriends! This story was great! I think you got some dates mixed up. If you're going to use real historical dates, Make sure that the events make the real ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: Love's Consumption
Hey Venak! Well, this story truly is how love consumes to the point of irrationality and insanity. Very, very...morbid. I didn't cringe when I read how he tortured his best ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: Shattered Love
Hiya there! First story: Oh wow :D Beautifully poignant. Definitely my favourite. It was really intense. This has the best potential to develop into a full-length story, With a detailed ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: a 'male or female' anime drawing
Looks male to me. Usually, female anime characters have eyelashes defining their gender. Things could improve on are: You shading could be better and more carefully done if you want ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
YWS writers are smokin' XD Hey! You stoleth my line, Jon! >_< Dream Deep, you remind me of Tilda Swinton! You're very pretty Ditto! I immediately thought of the Ice ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: Hola. I'm new. :)
I find it fun to watch you all fight over this, and hopefully I'll be joining to one of your groups soon. Bah, no decision needed. Greeters rule! :D (Though ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: Jiggity
Well, for some reason, the name 'Jiggity' gives me the impression of a joker. So a jester hat there must be :D ~Thanks for the lovely comments and have a ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: Out of Thin Air 2
*thinks* Does this story belong here? Because it seems to suit the *ahem* romance fiction forum. Anyway: I'm running short on time, so I'll have to give you a brief ...
Mar 7, 2009
