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  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Piano Forte

    Hey fellow Greeter! Anything with 'Piano' in it would certainly catch my attention, So I decided to check this out. What a spooky, enigmatic ending, Though, I must admit that ...

    Mar 7, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: An encounter

    Nice one, Helen! At the ending line, my jaw dropped and I actually whispered to myself: "What the-?!" Oh gosh, what a selfish creature Maria is. If you intended for ...

    Mar 7, 2009
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Blood Vessel

    Hey Face Engine(nice username!), I'll just bring up a few points: 1) The characters are rather flat, two-dimensional. Develop them more, explore more varieties of emotions and reactions, that will ...

    Mar 7, 2009
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: The Baroness, The Villainess

    Sumi!!! Hohoho, I have been ensnared by your story. It's so intriguing, and you've left out enough 'to-die-for' details, That would make your readers come back for more :D The ...

    Mar 7, 2009
  • General Articles Re: Disneyland Romance

    staplestoo, jok101, Please don't step out of line. Somethings were uncalled for. staplestoo: Harsh criticism is fine in reviewing the work, but not when you're insultig the author's life, considering ...

    Mar 7, 2009
  • General Articles Re: Disneyland Romance

    *sigh* I see you haven't been receiving very welcoming comments. Anyway, what I shall focus here, is your writing style, Not really on what happened and how ridiculous it may ...

    Mar 7, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Mary, The Obedience Fairy - [Part One]

    Hey anti-pop! This story is really interesting XD An obedience fairy? It struck me more as a little children's book rather than Fantasy fic at first though :D Anyway, for ...

    Mar 7, 2009
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Death of A liberator - corected spelling

    Hi pizcofriends! This story was great! I think you got some dates mixed up. If you're going to use real historical dates, Make sure that the events make the real ...

    Mar 7, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Love's Consumption

    Hey Venak! Well, this story truly is how love consumes to the point of irrationality and insanity. Very, very...morbid. I didn't cringe when I read how he tortured his best ...

    Mar 7, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Shattered Love

    Hiya there! First story: Oh wow :D Beautifully poignant. Definitely my favourite. It was really intense. This has the best potential to develop into a full-length story, With a detailed ...

    Mar 7, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: a 'male or female' anime drawing

    Looks male to me. Usually, female anime characters have eyelashes defining their gender. Things could improve on are: You shading could be better and more carefully done if you want ...

    Mar 7, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]

    YWS writers are smokin' XD Hey! You stoleth my line, Jon! >_< Dream Deep, you remind me of Tilda Swinton! You're very pretty Ditto! I immediately thought of the Ice ...

    Mar 7, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hola. I'm new. :)

    I find it fun to watch you all fight over this, and hopefully I'll be joining to one of your groups soon. Bah, no decision needed. Greeters rule! :D (Though ...

    Mar 7, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Jiggity

    Well, for some reason, the name 'Jiggity' gives me the impression of a joker. So a jester hat there must be :D ~Thanks for the lovely comments and have a ...

    Mar 7, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Out of Thin Air 2

    *thinks* Does this story belong here? Because it seems to suit the *ahem* romance fiction forum. Anyway: I'm running short on time, so I'll have to give you a brief ...

    Mar 7, 2009


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