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Re: Wrong answer.
XD Yeah, I lacked the character development and emotion. I thought short stories didn't need to develop so thoroughly ._. Pop: Erm, actually, I dropped a clue. Colin was Micah's ...
Apr 8, 2009 -
Re: The Search for Snoink
Note: The ending's an introduction any character who wants it. ______________________________________________________ Stumbling out of the room, Meep was back in the darkness again. She groped around
Apr 8, 2009 -
Re: Wrong answer.
Thanks lucyy, you were a great help! I really appreciate it! :D You weren't harsh at all. Just giving constructive criticism. Which was what I was looking for XD
Apr 7, 2009 -
Re: You Know You Want Some [re-opened]
*nudges* Hey Demi...Would you mind? ._. Wrong Answer. *dumps trayload of chocolate chip cookies on Demi's lap* Fresh from the oven :D
Apr 7, 2009 -
Re: Wrong answer.
“Watch it, asshole!” Micah heard the distinct crunch of his eighth pair of spectacles being stomped into yet another shapeless heap. Up against the cool metal of the locker, he ...
Apr 7, 2009 -
Re: What are you listening to at the moment?
Over & Over - Three Days Grace :D
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: The girl
Insany Insanity takes over when you have nothing to believe in, I wanted to write something very rough and different to my usual style, something you would have to really ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hey pusu_kala! Well, here I can formally greet you: Welcome to our silly but fantastically epic YWS family! :D:D:D Hope you enjoy your (hopefully long) stay here! ~Have a great ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Don't go after my heart
Hey again! I'm just dropping by to comment, 'Cause I'm not a poetry expert. But judging from your poems so far, I believe you have a flair for poetry, Especially ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Lionish Cat Drawing
Heh. Lion King eh? Demeter is going to be all over this thread in no time XD One thing I can point out for improvement is the hind legs. The ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Hi
*pokes head in* Hiya! :D A new addition to our ever-expanding and silly YWS family, I see. First off, kudos to Shauni, Selene and Colt for explaining the rules and ...
Apr 3, 2009 -
Re: Am I the only one on YWS when i have homework?
*raises hand ashamedly* Guilty. Speaking of which, I better get back to Logarithms. *shudders*
Mar 29, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [3]
Aww, thanks! :D 9/10 Made me laugh, but the one missing point was for freaking me out XD
Mar 28, 2009 -
Re: To keep a friend
Hi again, I'm not a poetry expert, but I'll point out one thing: A telegram, informing you that Jim died? Telegrams are normally sent during/after wars or for something important, ...
Mar 28, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [3]
6/10 I like shooting Tinkerbells out of the sky with my sniper rifle. Nyahahahaha :B *is kidding*
Mar 28, 2009
