Meep(:

Umm, is this supposed to be artistic? 'cause we have a "Post Your Pic Here!" thread in the Lounge, in case you didn't know. Other than that, you're not ugly. ...

Hey Shubhi! :D I'll just get straight down to business: 1) I would italicise Olivia's thoughts, if I were you, to make it clearer for the readers. Maybe add a ...

Hey Shubhi! Wow, this piece has already been throroughly nit-picked, so I shall just give me general comments. 1) Description: Like peanut has said, prologues can be descriptive. I'm guessing ...

Egads, you must practically worship this girl, judging by the shameless flattery in this poem. I guess it works for some girls, but I personally prefer less cheesy content :) ...

Umm... Okay, firstly, the format of the story comes in bizzare blocks so you'll need to rearrange that. Secondly, you ought to work on your punctuation. You're short of commas ...

My Kyogre totally destroyed Rayquaza. Oh, and welcome to YWS :D

Hey Lava! I saw your blog post and I'll try to help you out. You began two consecutive sentences with "It would also allow me to". Perhaps you can elaborate ...

Thank you YWS for the wonderful memories and friends :D ~Meep(: was here~ [will come back to edit]

Hey Ella_Mercy! :) As with the first chapter, I have no qualms with the writing quality of this piece. One thing though, I would suggest italicising the three "I love ...

Hey Ella_Mercy! I really liked this piece, especially for its succinctly vivid imagery :D You also have a interesting style of writing, with a very eye-catching quality :) This deserves ...

Hey there anima9! My first thought after this, was that this would make a spiffy monologue ;D Anyhoo, this was shorter than I'd expected so there isn't much room to ...

Hey Addawen19! I'm a little short on time, so I won't go into specifics. Okay, for descriptions, things like "her sapphire blue eyes sparkled", It is generally understood that sapphire, ...

I'm not a poet, But this was brilliant! Despite the serious tone of the poem, I was laughing at various parts throughout the poem. Oh, and excellent title. It really ...

Hey there, Magic Man :) Just a heads up, If you'd like help with work and stuff, you could post your request in Homework Help and the Lounge, maybe. This ...

Such modesty XD