-
Re: Photography (Long due.) + YWLJ submissions
Lava! :D They are all lovely pictures! My favourite is the first picture, probably because it has the most meaning, but I also liked the 'Where are the words?' (though ...
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: Impulse
Hi there! It's late here, so I'll be brief! 1) It's spelt as 'fiance' :) 2) Your story/scene is not too shabby! However, for such 'drama', a lengthier piece would ...
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: A Second Can Change Everything.
Hi there! It's late here, so I'll be very brief! Your descriptions and the conveying of emotions are great, so keep up the good work! The only advice I can ...
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: The Man Underneath
Hi Kevin! I'm here to hopefully help :D My husband lay on the bed, tightly I don't think this is a correct expression sleeping in the quiet night of November. ...
Dec 2, 2010 -
Re: my anime sketch pad part 1
You're a Naruto fan? These are really awesome drawings! The shading could be better for the 4th picture though, particularly below the head, the tones aren't that defined and some ...
Dec 2, 2010 -
Re: Anything Really (in collaboration with Snoink!)
Thanks for the help and compliments Dem, tuckerluvr & Ross! :)
Dec 2, 2010 -
Re: Anything Really (in collaboration with Snoink!)
Hi everyone :) The comic strip shown is my submission (or one of them) for the 2011 YWS Lit Journal. I merely did the illustrations and the storyline came from ...
Dec 1, 2010 -
Re: Scout and Mayella
I was fortunate to study that book for my O'level Lit :D I like your drawing of Scout!
Dec 1, 2010 -
Re: The Obsessive-Compulsive Kevin
:) Now you have been officially welcomed. Not yet, we haven't! There's still something extra we need to do :D *trumpet fanfare* *rolls out red carpet* *cue YWS paparazzi* There.
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?
Hai! I really need help with improving my short story (predominantly with how I express the piece), please. I'd be honoured to return the favour if you ever want a ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]
Whoa, you're in great demand o_o Would you please review this short piece for me? I normally don't use this forum but there's not been much help given to me ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]
If that's a wide smile, Lethero, then mine must be as long as the Great Wall of China :P
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: sweet sixteen and never been kissed part one
Hi there, I will be correcting mostly your spelling today. Please make proper effort to edit and check your work before you post them, because there are some very amateur ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: The Obsessive-Compulsive Kevin
You have a cool name o_o Hi Kevin! (I'll have to stick to that for fear of misspelling your proper name) I'm Meep(:! :D Firstly, welcome to YWS! We're always ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: Bliss: the Chronicles of Charlie and Logan part 2 (edited)
Whoa, it takes a really deplorable creature to attack a pregnant woman, especially one so advanced in her pregnancy. I assume that his culpability is diminished by alcohol? I hope ...
Nov 30, 2010
