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Author's Note: Hello and thank you for taking your time to read/review this! I actually laughed after writing this, because I've never come close to being kissed, let alone attracting ...

Hi there! Okay, so I'm not a Star Wars fan, therefore I can't comment on the accuracy of your art, though I do see the likeness xD Some things I ...

Hello there! It's late, so this is the last review I'm writing. Please bear with me if I'm blur or anything xD David lifted me into his arms and I ...

Hello there! Oh dear, I'm afraid I won't be of much help because I don't really have any issues with this! It's a lovely read of an aftermath, requiring no ...

Hello there! Let's see what I can do to help! This is rather short, so there isn't much to say except: 1) You switch points of view without clear signposting. ...

Oof, looks like Dudette has covered most of the points. But anyway, hi! I'd just like to reiterate one point she mentioned: While this is intended to be a short ...

Hi there! So these are a bunch of photos I've taken on various occasions. Nothing's been edited except resizing. I'd love to know how to improve them ^^ DSC_1945.JPG -DSC_0655.JPG ...

Hello! I love this (even though I'm a total scaredy cat) because you've captured the element of darkness well. I also associate it with creepy, though I'm not sure if ...

Welcome to YWS, Chloe! Your excitement is so palpable that it's infectious xD Hope you have a great time here! :D See you around! ~Meep(:

Hello! Your piece has been rather extensively critiqued, so I don't have much room left. Anyway, I was wondering if you plan to make this part of a novella/novel or ...

Hey there, I won't comment much on this piece, simply because it's a personal thing for you and not something really subject to edits when it's heartfelt. However, from a ...

Hey Elinor! :D I'll try not to repeat what's been said already. I’d definitely gotten more into my character then the night before. 'than', not 'then'. Anyway, I liked this ...

Drip drip drip. I stabbed the wooden floor with the mop, slathering the glossy sheen on the surfaces where she walked. Everything was too loud. The silence screamed at me. ...

I've got to agree with what BBB said. This is at best a random blog post that doesn't belong in this section, The Lounge maybe, if you're genuinely looking for ...