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Hai! MeatBunCat here~ Most of this is just gonna be reactions as I read, since I figure everyone news a few of those. (I like them). But before that, I ...

Hai, MeatBunCat here again! More reactions time: “Now, sir, lookee here, this woman is not the Princess Wolfria, I kin assure ya. This is my sister, Tanyy’; her husband jest ...

Hai, MeatBunCat here again! More reaction reviewing~ Rana held the fragile, yellowed papers with trembling hands, her lungs shuddering, her chest tightening over them as an icy cold like she’d ...

MeatBunCat here again! I couldn't move- some hidden force bound me. I struggled, but it was futile. I could see nothing, hear nothing, smell nothing. All my senses were silenced- ...

More reviews from MeatBunCat! allowing Gyer to do all the work. How did the horse protect her from the light? Did she just stand in his shadow, does he have ...

Hai! MeatBunCat with her 2nd of 3 planned reviews! I really like how you are sticking to the mostly poetic phrasing, it sets a different tone then I am used ...

Hai! MeatBunCat with her 1 of 3 planned reviews! Since this is pretty short, I'ma stick mostly to reacting and giving my thoughts on how you phrase things, because a ...

Hai! MeatBunCat here again! He looked around the hallway as if it were the first time he had entered and said, “Twenty pounds for the wrist, fifty for the neck ...

BeatBunCat here again! Gonna have to stick mostly to reaction bits again, you do a amazing job refining everything. Somewhere in Fethror Wouldn't this have punctuation? “G’day, milady,” a Sondí

Hai! MeatBunCat here to review another part of your story! Eric was very understanding and would always usher her away when any of the red stuff was around. I dunno ...

Hai! MeatBunCat here, stumbling in after I saw your newest chapter, figuring it was better to start from the beginning. Since this has a lot of reviews already, I'm gonna ...

Hai, MeatBunCat here! First thought I have with all of this, 'that is a massive block of text'. Break it up a little, if only to make the read less ...

MeatBunCat here again! Reviewing you're stuff is hard, its been refined so well, so most of this is just me responding to things since i didn't want to have something ...

MeatBunCat here to review all of your chapters, because I like this story! 1.) Opening paragraph and the following two paragraphs are nothing but term drops. Which is totally fine! ...

Hai there! This will be MeatBunCat's second review! I always loved fantasy stories, so am always eager to read one, and this opens up a pretty cool sounding world. probably ...