MeadowLark

'Ello there! Please forgive the crudeness of this review. I haven't reviewed anything since before Christmas and I seen that YWS was trying to reach a goal of 500 reviews ...

'Ello Celtic! My first review of the day >.< I hope this helps you. Description: I'm sorry to say I've been bitten by the descriptive bug and I have a ...

Heya there! I had forgotten I read the first chapter till I clicked on your link above xD Description: Greatly lacking, I'm afraid. This piece has the talking head syndrome ...

'Ello! Oki doki, the point of a prologue is to create an earlier story that will eventually tie into the main story. It also sets the setting and background. I ...

Heya! Alrighty then, shall we jump to the review? Paragraphs: I will not put anything in quotations here, for if I explain correctly, you will know what I mean. Okay, ...

Hi there! Wow. This was pretty neat, and I really liked it. I don't read Sci-Fi very often. It's usually fantasy where I've got my head stuck into. But I ...

Heya there! Interesting stuff you have going on, but I'm afraid this is improper use of the prologue. A prologue is meant to provide some earlier story [usually written in ...

'Ello, 'ello. I had written half a review for this piece, and I pushed a button and it all magically disappeared. So, I will try to rewrite it as best ...

Hiya! This is only the second review I've done in a long while, so please bear with me. Sentences: Oki doki! Some of your sentences are quite long, and in ...

Hello! I haven't reviewed in a long while, so pardon if this is rusty and whatever else. All right then, let's hop to it! The Prologue: The main purpose for ...

That was amazing, Snoink! I completly bawled my eyes out, it was just that good. The best piece I have ever read so far in months. Yet, I have a ...

Howdy there! Ah, I love indulging myself in stories that are filled with thieves. Glad I finally found one :D I never read previous reviews so I apologize in advance ...

Hi again Lydia! This is much improved and I enjoy it just as much as the first draft. I'm glad you added a bit more in there about the horses. ...

These are great, Leth! However, I'm not in the mood for dying just yet so I won't be leaving any request for my unnatural demise :D However, I have to ...

Hiya there, Lydia! This is a very interesting piece. I personally love the fact that you started the story out with horses. I always have to include them in my ...