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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Mary Beth

    Ohhh..thank you very much. Very good improvement. After rereading it, I saw that it was very akward...and one moan was definitely enough. I think I got carried away with it ...

    Apr 26, 2006
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Mary Beth

    This is still a prologue...a very long one at that. I'm just here to critique the prologue enjoy and tell me your thoughts^_^ ******* "Huhhhh....." whimpered a small naked lump ...

    Apr 25, 2006
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Mary Beth

    I know this may sound very bad Clover Madison, but Mary Beth is actually only about 9. I want to picture her as a very "disturbed", but eloquent heroine. I ...

    Apr 25, 2006
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Ahem.. Ahem.. Roald Dahl is here!!

    My favorite story from Roald Dahl is definitely FAntastic Mr. Fox. My 8 year old mind read it, and loved it.

    Apr 23, 2006


"In my contact with people I find that, as a rule, it is only the little, narrow people who live for themselves, who never read good books, who do not travel, who never open up their souls in a way to permit them to come into contact with other souls -- with the great outside world."
— Booker T. Washington, Up From Slavery