McKnight

thats awesome Liz, made me cry...its just that beautiful....(sobing)

Very excellent job, add some color and they'll be sweet!

I thank you all for the great replys, even if they weren't what I truely wanted to hear they will definaly help me out in the future. I just wanted ...

Dear Inquisitor, if you read this please tell me why you cahnged your over all from 7.0 to 5.5.

Well someone's pissy...nah I'm just kidding, I feel the same way about people. I don't agree with the person that said that the dedication was bad, I think it's awesome. ...

A very excellent piece, it really brings out the fact of affection for your father. Now if only I could say that about my father....pshhh yeah right!

Very nicely done, but I see it a lot. I personally get disgusted with it all after I hear these because it makes me see how horibble the world is...whatever, ...

- Before I start this, let me just have a chance to say that this IS my first time at writing. Please, understand that I am not perfect and I ...

I have to agree with the rest here, you have to keep going. It is quite odd that you started off with that short of an article, but just that ...