McGregorUK

I actually found this realy funny, i don't realy have anything bad to say about it. You've done a good job here well done. The only thing i would say ...

First off, i would have said hot not warm in the first paragraph. Other than that it's great, i'm realy interested in reading more work from you :), if you ...

I like the structure of the beggining two paragraphs though they are a bit vague. You have an interesting way of introducing the house which is a thumbs up from ...