McDanny

A great idea and a powerful message, but it could be presented with a little more clarity. My main issue is that occasionally it gets clouded by cod-Confucian philosophy, and ...

So far it's looking good, but I don't feel I've seen enough of the story to make a proper assessment. However, just a few things I need to point out; ...

“…as you may have heard, tonight we will get the most rainfall over this section of the East Coast in over a decade,” the weatherman spouted, flashing his perfect white ...

My initial reaction was 'oh dear, another soppy love poem' but after I had read it through properly, I began to get a feel of what the narrator was going ...

It may just be me going senile but, beautiful and poetic some of the description is, it was easy to get confused about what was happening at some points. But ...

Today is the day I tie the knot and as I do, I remember what my life was like, what was my lot before the day I tied the knot. ...

Whatever happened to constructive criticism, Space? I also don't see how you can tell anyone to spell better when you said a moment before it was 'plane bad'. Anyway, I ...

Well my birth name is Daniel White (before I got it hyphenated recently) so you can imagine my surprise at reading the main character's name. Anyway, as much as I ...

Oh by the way, my first submission ('Dead Inside') is up (it's not quite as depressing as it sounds). I put it up on Bebo and it got some good ...

Sorry if it's a little long, hopefully you'll have the patience to see it through.

Cautiously, they picked their way between rows of abandoned cars, flitting between the shadows of crumbling buildings. Moving stealthily like cats, two men, each cradling a shotgun, and three women ...

I liked this, but I do have some reservations about it. As I think someone else has already mentioned, it did feel as if I was just reading the middle ...

As much as I love the concept of this story, there are a few points I'd like to make. Firstly I do feel that the warning at the beginning did ...

No actually, I'm a strong Christian but I just love them, they're a great story even if I don't agree totally with the philosophy behind them.

Wow, everyone here seems so friendly... I take it most of you are from the US since everyone seems so surprised to see a British face? (apart from Dementer, of ...