Mazzi

The Narrator This was chaos! There must be somebody glitching the system! But who? I was trying to search my memories and knowlege of who could be so smart and ...

The Remainders: Concept They were supposed to die, but didn't, that changed the fate of the world. A group of teenagers were supposed to die. If they didn't they would ...

The small car moved slowly, making t i re tracks in the snow. - I don't know if you spell it differently somewhere else but we spell it with an ...

This reminded me of a relationship I had with a girl a few months ago. Well, we didn't really go out. But we really liked eachother, we were going to ...

Oh sorry. Didn't know you was Australian. (Or wherever else they say gay for happy.)

I'm going to be honest. I didn't like the second paragraph. I liked the first paragraph but the second (and last) just seemed slightly odd and away from the poem. ...

I am silent after reading that. I feel....I don't know how I feel. But it was good. Very good. Excellent. I could even go on to say; Exquisite. It reminded ...

1. Very good, It actually reminds me of the billboards I see sometimes when going around in big cities. You know the perfume ones? A very good picture and you ...

Or am I falling into something that I shouldn't ? Is this love ? Don't forget the two question marks! (Just in case you didn't notice I put them in ...

That was a brilliant peice! It was a slight hard to understand at first read, for myself. I really like how you build up to think that it might just ...

I'm glad to say that this is one of the first '5 reasons...' posts that I have actually enjoyed and didn't offend anyone. I'm glad that you chose reviews as ...

Yes this reminded me of a fable but with native-american origins (I think the native-americans had the gods of sky and earth and such.) I found it very entertaining and ...

I can't even nitpick this. It. Is. Brilliant. Yet so sad. Is this about a real person? Because it is in dramatic poetry and that means you wrote it because ...

Unconditionally, - I don't think you really need this and it sounds bad as a starting line. I'll stay here by your side. That's what you told me Then, you ...

Refresh the spirit Renew your soul Face your dread . Don't fear it Find new opportunities . Go near it Make them your goal And then again you will be ...