Mazohyst

Hiya, Irish :D I'm glad we're in the same group. Just a head's up, I'm breaking this review into two parts--Technical and Stylistic. Technical stuff includes grammar or spelling errors ...

I like the promise of this. Obviously the immediate question is "What happened?!" which is, in my opinion, a GREAT way to start off a piece of work, especially since ...

ETA on 7/28/09: Okay, after I had time to sit down and really work through it, I present my revised review/critique. Hello, Hannah~ I'm happy to review and critique this ...