Mazohyst

Hiya, Irish :D I'm glad we're in the same group. Just a head's up, I'm breaking this review into two parts--Technical and Stylistic. Technical stuff includes grammar or spelling errors ...

Is it okay to respond to reviews in here? =X I won't take too long, I promise, I just wanted to address something. First off, thank you both Hannah and ...

This is my first time submitting, so I hope I've done it properly. It's a bit long for a short story, so I opted out of posting it in the ...

XD Use it all you'd like! That's what I've been doing in my own story lol And there is a reason for Bella being my icon, but it isn't a ...

I hope it's okay to respond to these... Thank you all for the welcome! Everyone's been so kind here, that's such a relief :) Selene (may I call you Selene?) ...

I like the promise of this. Obviously the immediate question is "What happened?!" which is, in my opinion, a GREAT way to start off a piece of work, especially since ...

Count me amongst the fresh meat as well. A friend of mine posted about this place on her livejournal, so I took a chance and well.. here I am! Seems ...

ETA on 7/28/09: Okay, after I had time to sit down and really work through it, I present my revised review/critique. Hello, Hannah~ I'm happy to review and critique this ...

What I personally dislike about vampire stories is how writers take great liberties with the vampire mythos or canon. To me there's some very standard, typical things that constitute a ...