Mayfyre

That was really good, I liked it a lot. As it has been said before: Cut the first stanza. "I shake the Math symbols from my brain, Get up and ...

Storm-wings The late birds call the breathless moon, and through the trees watch embers fly The wild wind sings its restless tune, and glowing, fervent hearts and eyes paint the ...

I very much liked how you started off at the beginning. The unusual structure is quite promising and you handle it well, though it is a bit messy and off ...