Mayfyre

I liked this a lot, your imagery is great. I especially liked: "Periodic lights blink and flicker red and yellow, giving the illusion of light. Pools of shadow hint at ...

I listen to the rain, clenching my teeth and wonder whether the birds' song comes from the stereo or from the outside. Be reasonable; it's after midnight and birds sing ...

The lark The pale day fades and leaves the world to the unseen. Light shatters on the lucent fern and ancient silver bark, to a thousand opalescent pieces, mourned by ...

This is really cool :D I loved it, especially: "For jelly-red blood has spattered the fields, clinging like beads to the lettuce lips, perfuming the air with salty cells, saturating ...

Thanks for the poetry-compliment :D Magical realism absolutely rocks 8) Do you have a specific favourite book in that genre? I just recently read "The life of Pi", which was ...

I quite liked this, it definitely put a smile on my face because of its silly (in a good way) topic and the sheer randomness of a toad stealing lip ...

I thought that was a bit weak to be honest, but don't give up on it yet. With a subject that disturbing the reader should cringe in horror about the ...

I had to read this several times to figure out whether or not I like it, but I really do. I think the whole concept is quite strong and even ...

This is a good start. Writing about some one's eyes without using cliches is quite hard, but I think you had quite an original approach with the imagery that was ...

Wow, I really liked this. The imagery is incredible and create a great atmosphere. I especially liked: "Your shop is a birthmark hidden between forgotten streets, and I am the ...

Warrior : An application for employment ------ ----- ----- ---- ---- ----- ----

I quite liked this, even though I'm not normally a friend of soul-pouring in poetry. The topic (as disturbing as it is) is well handled and even though it is ...

I'm really impressed. This must be one of the most charming poems I've ever read. Your rhyme is simple, never forced and flows very nicely. The topic is absolutely sweet ...

I tried my hand at non-rhyming poetry, which is normally really not me, so I'm not very sure about it. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Wind and Fi

That is brilliant, I really loved (almost) every bit of it :D, though I might join in with the repeated stabbing of the last line :wink: The idea for the ...